tā / duì / zhè / gè / fāng / àn / tí / chū / le / jiān / ruì / pī / píng / rèn / wéi / xū / yào / gǎi / jìn

他对这个方案提出了尖锐批评，认为需要改进。

He offered sharp criticism of this plan, believing it needs improvement.