qǐng / bǎ / bào gào / gǎi de / jiǎn jié / yì xiē / bié / xiě de / fèi huà lián piān / dú zhě / hěn nán / zhǎo dào / zhòng diǎn

请把报告改得简洁一些，别写得废话连篇，读者很难找到重点。

Please make the report more concise instead of filling it with rambling nonsense, or readers will have trouble finding the main points.